Blake
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Owner of Phoenix
Posts: 13
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Blake
Jul 21, 2011 20:30:08 GMT -5
Post by Blake on Jul 21, 2011 20:30:08 GMT -5
NAME:Blake Birthdate:1997/01/15 Gender:male Age:13 Race:human Karma:Good Family:deceased History:Blake lived a happy life even though all his family was killed in an attack.He escaped by hidden passageways in his town.He ended up captured but they did not kill him he escaped by somehow summoning a "shadow" He lives in a cave alone but is alright practicing using his shadow the flaming wolf Personality:Nice, caring person who can take care of himself and is a loner.He doesn't like being around in crowds.When he is angry his niceness disappears quickly _____________________________________________________ Height:5"7 Weight 100 lbs Appearance:Tall,dark skinned skinny for his height. www.cellphone-wallpapers.net/Wallpapers/Cartoons/Boondocks/Riley-Boxing-Boondocks.jpg he has a scar on his stomach but he dosn't know what its from. Braids in his hair ______________________________________________________ Profession: in-training Abilities:Swords-man,Has a shadow,strong and intelligent can also tell where people are from miles and miles away Starter Item:Sword www.liberty-bell.jp/~cyonchon/goods/images/Sword_of_Fire_by_Morthian.jpg sword can set whatever it touches (unless user wants to) burns or catches on fire
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Blake
Jul 23, 2011 22:11:13 GMT -5
Post by Zola on Jul 23, 2011 22:11:13 GMT -5
Major problem: the Phoenix is Kluke's (canon) Shadow. You'll have to choose a different shadow.
Other than that, Personality needs a little more detail. I'd settle with History, but I request for at least 1 more line.
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Blake
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Owner of Phoenix
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Blake
Aug 11, 2011 18:16:12 GMT -5
Post by Blake on Aug 11, 2011 18:16:12 GMT -5
modified changed it to flaming wolf
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Blake
Aug 11, 2011 22:49:36 GMT -5
Post by Shu on Aug 11, 2011 22:49:36 GMT -5
Approved.
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